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Ledah: Arm, front-shoe, headsize Ary: Leg-position, handsize Yuna: Handsize Callo: poition (moved upwards a little to give more space to fade out) Ifrit, Yarna, Ariia: Nothing  YAY!Did I forget anything? Does it look better now?? Thanks for your advice!! x3 PLEASE give me advice on this one! I want to ink it as soon as my exams are over and I want it to be PERFECT!!! ;.; Well, at least as perfect as my artistic skills allow and so I can be really really really happy with it x3 Want it as a new cover x3 I'm not exactly happy with the old one... Only 2 charas, no perspective, nothing special, poor colors... So.... TIME FOR A NEW ONE! W00T!!! ;w; I love it how it is right now, but I know myself... i never see my anatomical flaws until someone points them out... (or till my skills grew more advanced... ) lol Essence of Time (c)  (Btw... I sense a new avy when looking at Ary and Ledah there xDxD Kiddin~) Comments Your work is amazing! Nice job. ^-^
-- “The more I see of the world, the more am I dissatisfied with it; and every day confirms my belief of the inconsistency of all human characters, and of the little dependence that can be placed on the appearance of merit or sense.” Pride & Prejudice -ch.24  This is awesome and I love your style. You should really make another tutorial.
 -- Please visit the list of Maltese Deviants & Clubs But that was when I ruled the world.  I'm not a Pro, so I can't offer an official critique, but I think it's very good. There are only a couple of minor things that I can see that might need tweaking.
The front character (sorry, I don't know names) looks like his left arm is slightly out of alignment with where his shoulder is, and his upper arm should angle in towards his body slightly more. Also, his left foot looks a little off, not quite sure why. Maybe it needs to be a little bigger, or the toes need a little more definition? Not sure... But overall, impressive!  I have no advice since I'm not an inker, but that is really good o.o
-- I'm not a bad person, just stupid beyond belief.  Ah,it looks so cool!!! *w* Even Callo's cute lil spirits are there!Great idea for a new cover! >w< I have just one more thing to say- Ary is going to fall!!! O: Her pose seems a bit strange to me. O.o
--  ~ ~Join my CONTEST! WIN AWESOME REAL PRIZES!!!  Read about it here: ~> [link] <~ >w<  PAPER CAT FTW!  I think the bracelet on Yuna's right arm looks a little off somehow, like it's angled the wrong way on her arm if you get me? I think maybe the 3d bit should be on the bottom of the bracelet, not the top. Sorry, I don't know how to explain it xD
Otherwise (and the stuff from previous comments) I think you did a really good job! can't wait to see it inked and coloured! (but take time to study and stuff for your exams too  )-- Final Fantasy addict  Dissidia ftw!If you think FF9 is underrated, copy and paste this into your signature!  happy holidays!!!  Cool!
 -- "Global warming is going to happen in 2 days before the day after tomorrow... oh my God, THAT'S TODAY!!!  "-South Park  They all look great o_o I don't see any anatomical errors. I can imagine this finished with shiny colours xD
I can't wait for you to ink and colour it!  Nice work with the perspective on Ledah, however his leg that's furthest away should get more progressivly smaller as it goes away. You've done very well on the arm that's closest to the camera though. Ary's leaning forwards a wee bit too much. I don't think that's possible xD Other characters look good though. I think there's just a little bit of tweaking on Ledah to be done.
-- ~fireemblem-club  I think it looks perfect! XDD I can't wait until this is completely finished but really it looks perfect!
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But enough of things your awesome at, onto my crazy ideas!
Err... idea...not pleural...whatever.
One thing I noticed is the length of Yarna's hair. It's normal length isn't making it stand out much, which is kinda bad because it is in a prominent spot, made even more prominent because it'll be surrounded by the pale wight of his wings. Why not make it longer and more flowing for this? In a montage you don't need to keep things so sane and logical!
...in fact such thoughts are almost your enemy.
...Probably.
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