Hm, sieht echt toll aus Wird bestimmt super
Was ich anzumerken hätte, wäre, dass die Augen des kleinen Mädchens nicht wirklich zum Mädchen passen...weil es so klein, und jung is xD
[Vllt. nich unschuldig, aber jung] Aber das is dein style, also..^^

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It's very nice I love the expressions.

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XD Hilarious. I can't anything wrong with it, but I'm not the best person to ask ^,^

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I it! ^^

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This looks fun! So you are asking for a critique before you ink it, lol. sorry bout the last one. but here goes.

#1: I cant tell if that is callo back there but, his left bicep is a litte longer than the other, making the position of his arm look a little awkward. His elbow should end only a fraction after his head.

#2:The woman, her left ponytail should be just a little higher on her head, or the right one a little lower which ever you choose to do. It doesnt appear that there is a head tiltm but the postition of her "pony" seems off.

#3: The banner on the post in the background, both sides are not of equal length. the left is longer than the right. (page view of course). since the right side seems to have picked up some of the wind, what if the left created a billow effect against the pole to add tot he effect (just a thought).


I will leave your work alone now and stop picking at it. but to be honest that was really all i could find. i rarely ever find any faults with your work. i just hope that my critques help and not hinder. i would love to see the finished piece.

PS: Study for your exams!

I really like it! The little thief is so cute, and the guy running has the best expression! XD I don't think I see anything wrong~ Well done

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personally i think that woman's left hand is a lil'bit too long. but i don't think it will be available to fix

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...The details will kill everyone here @___@

But it is still brilliantly drawn! It worths the hardwork, I can feel x3

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lovely awesome background

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